Shall We?
swirling like ballerinas
to a groovy disco tune
banging our heads
to the reggae, to the blues.
absurd, this dance
where you wear black lipstick and red gown
and I a glittering tightsuit,
pink tightsuit.
i've two left feet, you none (you float).
it's absurd, this absurdity
of making a playground of the floor,
sliding, swinging,
seeing stars,
sawing off limbs.
it's absurd, this dance.
but the music still plays,
your lipstick stays black,
my tightsuit glitters pink.
we dance.
4:00AM
May 17, 2006
slipped from the pen of Corsarius at 6:45 PM
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22 Comments:
why are all the guys into pink nowadays? saka tightsuit? glitter? (bwahahahahahahahah) saka black lipstick? (mahilig ka pala sa goth...) *sweatdrop*
absurd indeed. :D
beautiful absurdity. btw, is it possible for a person to be goth if he/she wears pink? or is black a requirement? haha.
uy, siya pa ang sweetie mo? =)
Yihee! :D
Nami-miss ko na mag-couple blog.
light....secret..! ;)
quel talaga o...hehe. when's your blog going to be finally up? you should be blogging! it's summer! :p (is that right logic? hehe)
maybe it's in the makeup. black lipstick is way too.... weird.
totally absurd. o_O
btw, nice poem!! :)
well, i loved the poem. and the black lipstick and tightsuit thingie makes it more... romanticized. besides, it's a refreshing change from conformity =P
ia, well, that's why i put it there in the poem ;)
i concur, yayam. thanks!
ygraine, i'm glad that you did. :) thank you very much.
'i've two left feet, you none (you float)' i can imagine that... the absurdity made the poem beautiful.
kind soul of an anonymous person, thank you. it's one of the lines that i love best.
"i've two left feet, you none (you float)"
I like this line pare.. :)
so...hmm...dancing is th new "IN" thing for guys now huh?
:D
this is a nice poem... a day ago, i watched again dead poet's society... the last time i watched it was when i was in 2nd year HS... never appreciated it... but when i watched it last thursday..i just realized that i've been a life of poems - a sacred romace between your heart, nature and God... poetic
the title reminds me of the abc5 show. ha ha. nice poem. :)
earl, then that makes you the 2nd happy person. and a happy writer, here ;)
er..claudzki, i assure you, the only dance i know to perform is waltz. haha!
judas, i'll forward that to pic's author :)
andy, you said, "i just realized that i've been a life of poems - a sacred romance between your heart, nature and God." man, i just love this line. a life of poems, containing all the tragedies and comedies. elegant.
ie, thanks. sabi ko na nga ba e, someone would remember that show :P
you should publish or something, then lend m money when you become rich :)
olrayt, no problemo, just find me that publisher! though i doubt there'd be one ;)
black lipstick, pick tightsuit, reggaes, disco tunes...
careful not to step on her feet.
since when have you been dancing, corsair?
i will take care, hera. if you mean the literal dance, then i'm no dancer. but if you meant metaphorically, then...hehe, tough question ;)
(obviously the corsair is blushing way too much [or trying to blush way too much] and is not able to answer the question properly. haha!)
ms. honest secrets..so i take it i was fortunate enough not to have watched it? hehe.
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